In My Name

Wow. that is a nice poem. I think there may be a typo, i'm sure it is recognized (the spelling). and there's one line that i feel needs another syllable. "literate whispers." it's just the way i read it. kept making me think whisperers. but i dont know if thats a real word. haha.

thanks for your comment on as you walk. i fixed the ending, well typos i found. maybe thats what threw you off. feel free to read it again. i hope its more clear.

I love this poem. i like how you didnt just use "everyday" words. you actually used words with meaning. and i love how with your work you actually need to think about it. i love the poem. great job.

Lol thanks! i loved reading it! i hope u write loads more!!!

You have wonderful voices, it is a beautiful poem! And it written ever so nicely. I really do not have anything "bad" to say about this poem I think it is so well written!

-AnnMarie

I like it, i feel the same way, when i write best the voice in my head just blurts it out and i gotta write it fast enough to keep up lol