Dancing in the rain

by Animus   Nov 22, 2006


Dancing in the rain.
I twirl and skip.
I laugh at the sheer joy in life.
I raise my face to the heavens, and thank God for lending me this time on Earth.
All my past mistakes are being washed away.
All the sorrow and pain is gone.
But only for that brief moment in time while I dance in the rain.
As soon as I step through the door, I must take that weight back onto my shoulders and struggle through another day.
But only until God starts crying again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jeremy B

    So, the rain comes from God crying? Well, if you dance in His tears everytime He cries, i think you'll cheer Him up and we wont get much rain! lol, good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by iNfAmOuS

    The last line was an excellent end to a very good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked this one because it had such a childlike innocence to it.
    Excellent work!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by John

    Once again - you remind me of the time I danced in the rain with someone I love...I have a picture too!

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