Comments : Dancing in the rain

  • 17 years ago

    by John

    Once again - you remind me of the time I danced in the rain with someone I love...I have a picture too!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked this one because it had such a childlike innocence to it.
    Excellent work!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by iNfAmOuS

    The last line was an excellent end to a very good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jeremy B

    So, the rain comes from God crying? Well, if you dance in His tears everytime He cries, i think you'll cheer Him up and we wont get much rain! lol, good poem