by Birgit Nov 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Every night that I'm alone I wonder why.. |
by Gem
"Cried so much tears.. made an ocean so deep.. |
by Mark
Well Birgit, I love verse 3, you could make a song out of this, with 2 vers and 2 refrains, The structure seems fine aswell, though there are alot of "you's" at the end of every line, be carefull with that.. Though in all 4/5 for a good poem :) |