G00D J0B! KEEP iT UP!

[{[{SHELBY}]}]

Your last two stanzas were amazing! They just were the kind I wish every writer could write like!
But I did want to say, there were some flow problems in this poem. It lost it's rhythm from time to time, but the expressions in it made it well worth the time to read. It was very good. And thank you for such a great comment on one of my poems!
Charisma*