Bryan, I'm going to be honest with you: that poem made me cry! I don't know why, but it did. It was short and to the point, but for some reason it made me cry! ='[ Not many poems can do that, but yours did! Great job hun!

Ciao xx

Deep. the rhythem was good.and flowed beautifuly. so many people can relate to those words. great work. :)

Wow bryan, this is really a great poem, 5/5 from me...
keep it up

Bryan, how sad! I never knew what a Trois-Par-Huit was, still don't but I trust that you did this style perfectly!! Yes, you are missed in the club!!! =[ lol well, I hope that you get everything straightened out! =]

Ciao xx

Sweet! 5/5

Beautiful poem.