Good poem i liked it alot u got sum talent i give u a 5/5 keep ya head up in stay strong
~kristina~

Yo u definitly goin hard on deez lines. FCK da streetz I grew up beneth dat in tha gutta. Sh*t be crazy in da hood. It iz true doe dat niggaz be gettin killed ova some bullsh*t. I had 3 homies die and 1 kill himself b/c of it. I can relly relate to ya poems. Keep up da good work and God bless.

Stay Playa,
SC

Oh and by tha way are u mexicano. I am. I ask cuz you say "vato". Not very many hispanos say dat I only herd mexicanos say it.

Nice poem! Its true life is hard on the streets when your down with the blue.
You gotta be prepared with a 45 walking down the block. Anyways nice work! .:*.