by Brittany C Nov 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Everything seems bright when you are by my side, |
by Vanessa
That was well written, a few mistakes, but no big deal. Very specail , and extremely loving. |
by Alesia
I can totally relate to this poem! It's so beautiful, and has a the look of a great song! I'm just totally in love with this one! Amazing work! |
by Melissa
Good poem.b |
by donna
This poem is really sweet.. Only a slight error in the first stanza with the word 'fill' it should be 'feel'.. other than that very well done 5/5 xx |
by Stephanie
Aww. That was a very special and loving poem to read! :) Made me smile. You had a good flow and an excellent choice of wording. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5 |