I like the meaning of this but I think you have some errors. Please dont take this the wrong way or anything, i just want to help.
"When you hold my hand I fill safe,
And when you hug me I fill loved, "

I think fill should be feel.

Other then that it was great!

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sincerely
~skittles

Aww. That was a very special and loving poem to read! :) Made me smile. You had a good flow and an excellent choice of wording. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

This poem is really sweet.. Only a slight error in the first stanza with the word 'fill' it should be 'feel'.. other than that very well done 5/5 xx

Good poem.b

I can totally relate to this poem! It's so beautiful, and has a the look of a great song! I'm just totally in love with this one! Amazing work!

Alesia

That was well written, a few mistakes, but no big deal. Very specail , and extremely loving.