Tomorrow Morning

by Katlynn   Nov 23, 2006


I want you to tell me everything.
that's been on your mind.
I want you to tell me you love me.
like a crystal in the sea.
sparkling in spite of your voice.

make up your mind take a choice.
tell me, sing me a note.
a tune so i can breath in this world.
I'm falling for you even deeper.
I do believe your a keeper.

I want to kiss your lovely reddish lips.
I want you to hold me by my hips.
tell me things in my ear i want to hear.
I promise i won't push away.
I do promise I do care.

so tonight lets runaway.
hold hands to the end.
be like Bonnie and Clyde.
just being something we aren't.
but our love is something thats true.

my heart isn't hurting anymore.
you have opened up the door.
I let you pick me up off from the floor.
I let you see me for me.
so for my request please babe.
tell me whats on your mind.

we can become Romeo and Juliet.
lets kiss away the pain together.
lets drink a poison so we can die.
die together like we are made for.

this is crazy, this is nuts.
but I can't help this anymore.
shut and lock the door.
behind you my love.
tell me your words of love.
tell me your wisdom.

tell me anything you have.
sing me a song then if you don't know.
I'll sleep on my bed.
while you cuddle next to me.
brush my hair out of my eyes.
kiss me on my lips.

whisper good night.
tell me sweet dreams in my ear.
and everything will be ok.
you told me.
and also babe before you go to bed.
I love you, "I love you to" is your response.

you fall asleep.
your the one I want to keep.
before I shut my eyes.
I don't even want to die.
I don't even want to cry.
the thing I got is right here.
In my arms.

smelling my hair.
my clothes.
my pillow.
telling me that if I leave.
"I always have a smell of you"
I got it now, that's what you do.
make me feel safe.
make me feel alive.
make me feel happy.

this might be long.
this might not make since.
but now i know my purpose.
to be here with you tonight.
is that you love me and I love you.

I can truly say that.
and I can truly mean that.
one more look at the sky.
I'll shut my eyes now.
knowing you'll be here.
when I wake up tomorrow morning.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ♥Cindy♥

    I love this poem says so much through words 5/5 =]

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Ah. Ok, you really need to work on the stanza advice I gave you. The poem just didnt really seem to flow to me.
    It was good don't get me wrong but it could have been better.
    God Bless 4/5 sorry.

    ~Tay

  • 17 years ago

    by AmberLynn

    Katlynn,

    This poem is awesome! I love it!! I love all your poems though...lol...Good Job!

    Love,

    Amber

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Like a crystal in the sea.
    sparkling in spite of your voice
    ^^ I loved those lines. Great word choice. The poem was very good.. You really expressed all of your emotions well and it could be felt throughout the poem. I also liked how you referred to Bonnie and Clyde & Romeo and Julet.. I thought that it was very cute. I think that you did an amazing job on this poem.. it was all very well worded and filled with lots of emotion. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Hey great peom thanks for commenting on my poems i just wanted to explain to you the last part of my poem called "just a little walk" that you didnt understand......this is the last part........."she prayed really hard
    and then stared at the yard
    now the little girl as pretty as can be
    she took that walk and
    boy did she feel that breeze." ........well what it means was that those boys took her to a house, they raped her, so she knew she was going to die so she looked out the window of the old creepy house she was in and prayed and then she started to die slowly....okay thats the meaning of it anyways thanks for the comment byee