It seems you put a lot of time into this poem, it's very good!! 5/5 :)

Sweet poem. I wish that I have a love like that.5/5

Great poem,very warm and heart felt,the flow was good, Ah love is grand!

This was a really lovely poem. It was kind of long but I liked it. Besides a few grammer, spelling, and punctuation mistakes I think that it was great. 5/5 keep up the good work!

Letty

Beautiful penned yet flowed well with beautiuful emotions you potray here, though long but worth to read..marvellous!

Hey great peom thanks for commenting on my poems i just wanted to explain to you the last part of my poem called "just a little walk" that you didnt understand......this is the last part........."she prayed really hard
and then stared at the yard
now the little girl as pretty as can be
she took that walk and
boy did she feel that breeze." ........well what it means was that those boys took her to a house, they raped her, so she knew she was going to die so she looked out the window of the old creepy house she was in and prayed and then she started to die slowly....okay thats the meaning of it anyways thanks for the comment byee

Like a crystal in the sea.
sparkling in spite of your voice
^^ I loved those lines. Great word choice. The poem was very good.. You really expressed all of your emotions well and it could be felt throughout the poem. I also liked how you referred to Bonnie and Clyde & Romeo and Julet.. I thought that it was very cute. I think that you did an amazing job on this poem.. it was all very well worded and filled with lots of emotion. Great job on this! 5/5

Katlynn,

This poem is awesome! I love it!! I love all your poems though...lol...Good Job!

Love,

Amber

Ah. Ok, you really need to work on the stanza advice I gave you. The poem just didnt really seem to flow to me.
It was good don't get me wrong but it could have been better.
God Bless 4/5 sorry.

~Tay

I love this poem says so much through words 5/5 =]