This feeling!

by Lacey Marie   Nov 23, 2006


This feeling is true.
Every time I'm with you.
With your arms around my waist.
I always know what to do.

When I'm with you,
We walk hand and hand.
And we walk on the beach,
With our feet buried in the sand.

Your arms are my shelter.
Your body is my home.
You help me get through it.
So I'm not so alone.

This feeling is real.
It will never die.
You'll always be there for me.
And never make me cry.

I know this every time,
you gently kiss my lips.
Or touch me,
with your loving fingertips.

My tears are all gone,
Because I will never cry over you
And we share so much compassion
with the love that is forever true!

I love the way you touch me
in a way i cant deny.
There are things i love
and so badly wanna try.

So come on baby!
you know you wanna dance with me.
swinging in your arms
and we'll be together for eternity!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darlena

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    You help me get threw it
    and make me feel..like I'm not so alone

    threw = through
    the line after that is kind of too long .

    or touch me
    with your loving fingertips

    I love that(:

    in a way i cant deny

    Please use punctuation . And capitalize some of yur i's =.=;; It`ll make the poem look better and will help . The poem wasn`t great, but it wasn`t bad either . Overall, it was nicely written .
    I give yu 4/5 .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Hey, thanks for the comment. i really liked this poem, it was really sweet. it had graet wording and detailing..keep it up. 5/5