Hey, thanks for the comment. i really liked this poem, it was really sweet. it had graet wording and detailing..keep it up. 5/5

You help me get threw it
and make me feel..like I'm not so alone

threw = through
the line after that is kind of too long .

or touch me
with your loving fingertips

I love that(:

in a way i cant deny

Please use punctuation . And capitalize some of yur i's =.=;; It`ll make the poem look better and will help . The poem wasn`t great, but it wasn`t bad either . Overall, it was nicely written .
I give yu 4/5 .
..__MiNDYY

I L0VED THiS P0EM. iT`S S0O BEAUTiFUL. NiCELY WRiTTEN. i GiVE iT A 5/5.

FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS WHEN U GET THE CHANCE. THANX. :)