Rock And Roll Suicide. [Terzanelle]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Nov 23, 2006


Rock And Roll Suicide.

Crocodile Tears streamed down her foundation disguise,
Masking all of the labels pasted to her brittle heart;
And hiding a past in her eyes that she painfully denied.

Cherry lips quivered as the battered knife tore her apart,
And her scarlet blood trickled onto the bathroom floor -
Masking all of the labels pasted to her brittle heart.

Her soul yelled: "Stop!", but her head yelled: "Cynical wh0re!"
But in the corner of the mirror there was a tiny red note -
And her scarlet blood trickled onto the bathroom floor.

The cotton candy pills and whiskey tickled at her throat,
As she looked to her reflection and believed her lies -
But in the corner of the mirror was a tiny red note.

Drowning in a broken lullaby was her rock and roll suicide,
And on top of her homecoming photo, roses were placed -
As she looked to her reflection and believed her lies.

A mother's screams echoed through her corpse as -
Crocodile tears streamed down her foundation disguise.
And hiding a past in her eyes that she painfully denied -
She looked down to a daughter that she no longer has.

© Jenna Elphick
November 22, 2006

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A Terzanelle is a 19 line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is a repetent reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the next-to-last stanza which appears in the quatrain.

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__ May be a tad confusing in the last few stanzas and all, but if you don't get it, just ask me. __

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Oh darling. thats so sad. :( i love you.
    and no matter what i am always here for you ohkay... well you no me... loving till the end. :love:
    i will nevefr leave you sweety.
    i love you . and that was an awsome poem

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Jenna, I could never do that type of poem, but you did it flawlessly! Beautifully written, and I liked the title, it made me want to read it. You are a fantastic writer!

    Ciao xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem, deserves to be a 5!!! keep it up!!!

    Bryan,