I can't believe it! people have read this and haven't commented. good/sad poem. i like it. i'm a bit teary eyed. but i'm coldhearted or so i've been tolds so i'll be okay. Aww! no i won't. it's a good/SAD poem! *sniff*

WOW, brought tears to an old mans eyes. Great peice of work! Tissue please.

Very good poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5 I can some what relate my boyfriends dad died when he was on his way home to.

Wow truly amazing! it made me cry!

Another great poem, another 5/5 from me. greatly written

Wow,that poem put me into tears(actaully i'm still crying)so if i have spelling mistakes you know why(cause i can't see anything at the momment) omg where to being...you are and excellent poet,you get a 5/5 for this no questions asked...it should be higher then a five but they onl;y let you go up to five on here:(...thank you so much for your comment on my poem and now you are on my favorits list,so i'll start reading more of your work:)...until then...goodbye
auna

This was heartbreaking. You have a real talent. :)

This poem made me cry. it was so sad. i loved it 5/5.
♥Kelsey♥

Omg this is sad. im sorry this happened to you. i hope you feel better and your life is going good. great poem 5/5

Very nice. Gave me goosebumps.
Who's the kid here?

xxx.