Comments : Just One Day

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I gots 1st comment!!! w00t!

    *serious*
    "Spending my life with you,
    Nothing i want more,
    Please tell me you love me,
    Don't run for the door."

    That stanza can relate to quite a few people that i know in many ways. most of the poem can, but i liked the way it ended on an almost hopeful note.
    Someone would be lucky to have you love them judging by the way you write..
    Keep em coming!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • Hey thats really nice, keep it up
    ^_^ stephanie