A great dedication and surely from the heart.I'm sure she will be proud of you and your excellent work. 5

5/5. Great poem. I'm sorry for not commenting 2 poems I'm just reallyout of it b/c i got to work in a couple hours. grr. I really liked this poem because it shows great emotion within. I gotta say your a great writer. Keep up the great work

Wow, this is such a sad, yet hopeful poem. The fact that you mentioned you still love your mom, leaves this poem very inspirational. Through all the bad, the hurt, you can still manage to say "I love you" to your mom. Very good poem! I liked it :)

Letty dear,
what a emotional poetry you picture here, though sad but you writing them with beautiful emotions, so sorry if you feel like this, but remember one thing, in life, love & forgiveness is in your heart, keep it forever.

bless your heart dear! be safe.

bert ~

That was a lovely poem. So full of emotion. I'm sorry that you may feel you've let your mum down with mistakes you've made in the past, but despite all of that, she still loves you, as you do her. She would be very proud of this poem, I'm sure. =]

Wow... this in an amazing poem, you did really good on it. I love the emotion in it as well, very beautiful. 5/5

I think that this is a greating poem. Full of emotions. I also think that this poem has a great rhythm to it. And that you have get word choice.5/5

Dear my friend Letty,
im sheding tears as i write this comment, this great poem made me cry as i know how you feel, but one thing you should know is that we all pray for your mom, and we are all there for you, as you are a great person, you dont deserve tears....

Amazing job. I loved this so much, great emotion in it i almost started to cry right at the end. I didn't want to cry so i kept it in but i know how this is like && we are here for you.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever. thank you for commenting my poem means alot to me.

Letty dear, i thought i've read your poem before, by the way just want to let you know.... "mother" Her love cannot be measured, or confined by bricks or bars, It would burst through walls of steel, feel and go out beyond the stars. Should a child ask of it's mother, What can I do for you? She'd waste no time in saying Just tell mommy, "I love you".... anyway, keep writing, and have a good day... take care.

This poem is really beautiful
deserves a 5/5

Letty I havnt been on here for a while and i see you are still penning wonderful poems like this one..
I would love for you to join my poetry forum at http://www.makephpbb.com/phpbb/index.php?mforum=artandpoetry

o that others may see your poems
Love
John

I liked this, conveyed quite a bit of pain... not sure if your refering to just the normal eventual loss that is life or if your mother is sick? But either way I wish the best to you and yours... I look forward to reading more of your work!

Cheers,
Richard