Cut

by BehindThisSmilex   Nov 23, 2006


The blade is resting
on my porcelain skin
pushing it down
sliding it across
blood seeps out
it runs all down my arm
warm water
rushing over me
the burning and stinging
over the gently made slits
the pain in my wrist
covers up the pain in my heart
because there is no greater pain
than feeling empty
feeling hated
and feeling betrayed
finally finding out the truth
and realizing that your life is worthless
realizing that
everyone around you
thinks you'd be better off dead
this is why
i have these slits on my wrist
this is why i speak these words
and this is why
i hold this cold fear
in my heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion

    Wow, this was really sad, but so good in the same way. i know how this feels, i go through it too. good work xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    'porcelain skin'----great descriptions.

    i can tell you have worked on expanding your vocabulary and description. that is always useful when it comes to poetry. lol

    once again great write

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, again such a great poem with so much emotion and feelings. it makes me just want to give you a big hug and tell you everything will be ok. keep smiling hun things will get better x x x x x x take kare x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelso

    This poem is great. when i read it i got a mental image like you should when you read a poem. great job 5/5.
    ***Kelsey***

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    Ah!!! I LOVE it!! Everything just goes together. And me being in this situation myself so many times, I know it is SO true. and what I like about it the most is how true it is and how real and it's like I can feel it or see you. GREAT Job!!

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