Wow this is really good. I loved the way you desribed it....very true to the heart. 5/5

AWESOME. i feel the same way. great job.

Thnx for the comment, im sry that ur going through the same thing:(. this was a great poem! i loved the detailing and emotions you used..i could sense the hurt. keep up the great work. 5/5

THis poem had so much emotion in it. I could almost feel the blade myself. Very deep. keep it up.

This is a well written poem but very sad and i do hope u get help cause cutting isnt rite

That really related to allot of people and myself, it was an incredible poem.

lovee. much?

xx natalie.

"we can only be what we already were"

That really related to allot of people and myself, it was an incredible poem.

lovee. much?

xx natalie.

"we can only be what we already were"

Ah!!! I LOVE it!! Everything just goes together. And me being in this situation myself so many times, I know it is SO true. and what I like about it the most is how true it is and how real and it's like I can feel it or see you. GREAT Job!!

This poem is great. when i read it i got a mental image like you should when you read a poem. great job 5/5.
***Kelsey***

Wow, again such a great poem with so much emotion and feelings. it makes me just want to give you a big hug and tell you everything will be ok. keep smiling hun things will get better x x x x x x take kare x x x

'porcelain skin'----great descriptions.

i can tell you have worked on expanding your vocabulary and description. that is always useful when it comes to poetry. lol

once again great write

Wow, this was really sad, but so good in the same way. i know how this feels, i go through it too. good work xoxo