WoOp! i liked this poem it flowed really well, iye it was long but it wr that good i doubt ne1 will have any problems with it! =]=]=]
loved reading it =]=]=]

~*~Jen~*~

Hun... I love you and I'm here to listen whenever.... just know that!

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Aww, you are great! Your poems are awesome! Keep writing love!
Thank you! :D
5/5
Love this poem, last verse made me smile :))
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You are so right!! your poems are really LONG!! but the last verse made me giggle. i really like your poems, they are straight to the point and full of emotion

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Marvelous poem, you're great!
keep writing.

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U can't without lov. i can relate to this. it helps to talk to someone that went through the same. the poem seem so tired and regreting. this touched me deep. at the beging seems that u ment the end of the rop, but at the end u so much hope. i lov it:)

OMG! Okay you can not do anything to hurt yourself OR give up on love! There is someone out there for you trust me! You are the sweetest guy ever! I love talking to you and knowing that I will be able to comment on one of your amazing poems or read a really sweet comment from you! And if anything ever happened as to where we wouldn't be able to talk or anything.......it would hurt me a lot...cause it's kinda like you are a part of me...I don't mean to sound weired or anything...I'm just saying...well I have to go now....nothing really to do today so I think I'm gonna go take my friends truck and drive it around the farm...yeah that's rigth I'm cursed with living on a farm...damn....lol Well LOTS OF LOVE!
Your friend.....
Burning~Wings

I LIKE YOUR POEMS I THINK THEY ARE REALLY GREAT AND I ESPECIALLY LIKE THIS ONE I THINK IT IS REALLY SWEET. YOU HAVE TO KEEP ON WRITING CAUSE I ENJOY READING YOUR POEMS. 5/5

KELLY
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"Love is but four letters,
That were never meant to last."

Those two lines put everything into perspective at times don't they. At the end of the day love is just a word, in some apsects anyway.
Another gem of a poem you have here.
Great ending too ;)
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Awww. that was just absolutely lovely. very clever. keeep writing, you do a wonderful job!