"My blue tears that never dry,
Keep on coming as I cry."

Such a sad opening but it set the theme for the rest of the poem nicely
As always you have powerful images.
Keep em coming..
5/5
*Gem*

THiS iS G00D! KEEP iT UP! THANKS F0R THE C0MMENT!

[{[{SHELBY}]}]

Very nice poem very very nice emotions and the last stanza sums in all up very well keep it up happy thanksgiving to you

Excellent title! I love how you placed your title at the end of every stanza..makes a great effect for your poem...Thought this was a well written poem and I enjoyed reading it!
Krissey