A good poem, a strong beginning and slightly weaker ending, but overall, nicely done!
Charisma*

Yes i agree with CharismaticCountryGirl but it was a very nice poem keep it up sweetie!! and happy thanksgiving to you

Beautiful poem dear. It was very strong and not many people write about being on the other side of a break up when sometimes its just as hard. Wonderfully written, I loved it, keep writing. 5/5.