Very beautiful. The one you write for would be very lucky to have you. Another terrific poem, just as they all are. 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Read this in the poetry contest area, it's really good and one of your better I think. good job!!!
Charisma*

How romantic.. :o) Very nicely written, all of your poem flows so smoothly & could be felt right from the heart as thats where they are coming from too.
Really loved it all the way

all the best and take care

When I'm with you, we reach the stars
To a place where heavens not to far
It's all paradise when I'm with you
Cos our love is sacred, special and true
^^^^
A beautiful ending stanza Gemma !
Good luck with the contest, looks like a winner to me.
Wonderfully written love poem!

Beautiful poem, 5/5

"Just how lucky can one girl be?
You took my spirit and set it free
Free to love you with all my soul
Finally with a heart that's whole"

Sweetie, this is g-r-e-a-t! I love it!

P.S. I think we're both on here pretty much 24/7! lol, Isn't this site addicting?

Aww very cute..love the rhyme here, awesome writeeee :)