A Broken Mans Heart

by MC_Smurf   Nov 23, 2006


The first rain drop of winter is broken mans tear
With his sickest known to be called as rare
The first breathe he takes he realizes
His life is full of ups and down like a kite
So he sits down, inhaling the fresh air
But notice his soul doesn't seem to be all there
Like a yearbook, his head is full of memories
All concentrating on her, with no boundaries
This is his first Ballad Poem, written in tears
Done with the help of his emotional fears
Blood vessels no longer pump in his heart
Only the memories of her pumps within his heart
Past love will someday run out in his system
Until that days come he will remain Heart Broken

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  • 17 years ago

    by silence

    This poem seemed a little rocky ~ not like the other. still a good write though.

    "Like a yearbook, his head is full of memories
    All concentrating on her, with no boundaries"

    i think that's my favorite part :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love the rhymes and I love the metaphors, wonderful poem. Well written! 5/5