Please Don't Leave

O k here we go alright first off you used the words dark and world a lot, you should find synonyms for them, It kind of threw the flow off just a little but, the emtion was heartfelt, and the word choice for the most part was good, but I have seen instances where you have done better, i hope I am not being harsh, or sounding mean, i am just trying to help. Other thatn that work on punction, remeber, . and ect usually mean to take a breath, (pause) try rereading you work, and adding a short pause where you have added all that that was you can tell if it is going to mess the flow up, when others read it. 5/5

Almost made me cry, good job, better flow....

5/5

Not necessarily the best written poem, but this is all about the emotion and it does a great job of conveying it. Simple words, for a simple emotion. Well done.

Another great poem.
I think I'll add you to my favorites and continue to read your poems, when I have time. :]
Good Job! :]

This is such a heartfelt poem .
Straight from the heart . It was nice(:
..__MiNDYY