Hey i really enjoyed reading this poem cause right now thats whats happening to me my best friend just left me in the dirt to cry

You are really good at writing poems :]

I love this one! good job!

I totally understand this poem! you're a great writer! I love your work! keep it up, can you plz comment on mine :) xo

Not much left to say except that its great piece of work. 5/5
~Br0k3n

BEAUTIFUL i loved it. short but amazing. you truly are a great poet. but i have to ask....do you write from experince? it seems like all your words are stright from the heart. another 5/5

WOW

OK...sry it dident let me finsh what i was gonna say but wow that was really good i know just waht your trying to say ive been down that road many timez b4 but any who that i was really good keep up the great work!

I really enjoyed this pain and it was almost as if i could relate to your poem, like i almost new what you were going threw.

The first stanza is by far my faviorate.

Hey this is really good!!! it was so real xoxo

This poem is absolutly amazing.

This is really good,ur definetly in my fav's

Perfectly and beautifully written. Very good job 5/5

PrElUdE 2 A KiSs

GOOD JOB I CAN REALTE TO THAT POEM ALOT ABOUT ME AND MY GF SO I CANT REALTE NOT A LITTLE BUT ALOT KEEP WRITEING COMMENT BAC = ] YOUR DEFINATELY IN MY FAV'S

CrYsT@L P!sT()L AKA CRYSTI

A lovely poem as awlays, teh i dont usally comment but this one, i just had too. iv gone tought lots of reationships like that wether it was a friend family member or someone special. anyho the flow of the words were wonderful keep writing and im shure ill keep readin
5/5

I love this poem. it was deep, showed emotions. i love it. Awesome=D

Flawless. 5/5, Em