Shattered Pride

by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©   Nov 23, 2006


In Negligence To Protect
He Manipulates My Soul
While Breaking a Broken Heart
Begging To Be Whole

Raping Me Of My Pride
He Leaves Me In My Shame
Labeling Me Another Pawn
In His Foolish Game

Splattered Upon The Concrete
Lies My Shattered Face
Along With The Broken Tears
His Words Has Helped Create

Killing Me Internally
With Blood Bleached On His Hand
As He Smiles Upon My Death
He Thinks Hes Now a Man

Frolicking In Existence
He Penetrates My Death
He Knows That I'm In Love With Him
The Stars Have Stole My Breath

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  • 17 years ago

    by CondescendingHeart

    Excellant.... Great... Wow.
    Im Stunned at how well written your poetry is... you are an amazing writter.
    keep it up!

    TheJohnston;
    ( L )

  • 17 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    "Rapping" should be "raping" probably. I really like your one-liners becuase they express so much emotions with your cunnng word play. Looks like it's along the same lines as your more recent piece huh? I actually read your profile this time and so I know that you base your poetry off of real-life experiences. I'm sorry. Maybe you'll learn to love again.

    Aken Sol

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Nikki...this was superbly written. I can really relate to the words that have flowed from your pen.
    You always have a unique style and presentation for your beautiful writting.

  • =) Aww I Luv My Chels! *Hugs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Frolicking In Existence
    ^^ Not only is Frolicking one of my favorite words..buts thats one of the best lines I've read in a poem in such a long time Nikki...I just love your poems because theres always at least ONE thing minimum that I just absolutley love about it!! Such great choice of words and the structure of your poems are always excellent! No less than a 5 of course
    Much love hunnii
    Chelsey