Wow! Great job!

5/5. I liked how you did the beginning and the end. Great Job.

Sad poem. :( But I enjoyed reading it. Very nicely written.

Dear God! That took me back to a place in my life many years agi! Very chilling read for me.

Very nice dark poem..the flow was better in this one than your other poem:)...i liked your wording and the flow:)

Wow.. you did a really good job on describing everything in this. Your word choice was very good and helped add more feeling into the poem.
And the darkness is slowly corrupting my mind,
^^ That line stood out to me the most.. it definitely holds alot of meaning. This poem was definitely dark.. it gave me the chills! You are an amazing poet! Keep it up && don't ever stop writing :)

Hmm deep its good 4/5

Awesome poem

I like this poem alot! Great Job! Keep up the good work! =]

This poem is very dark, I really like it. You have a great imagination, and a very big talent. I loved the second stanza the best!

Keep up the awesome work!

5/5

This line is good 'cursed for eternity to remain in darkness'-well done i like i like

Cool poem! i really loved it! the darkness......its an awesome poem...great work!

The only mistake I noticed was that
"The pressure is just to great,"
should be
"The pressure is just too great,"

Other than that, I really loved this poem. The first stanza has especially great imagery. The second stanza has better meaning, though. An excellent read!

5/5.

A really great poem!! It had a good flow and word usage. One thing i didnt like was the punctuation. I thought you should of used enjambment or something. You ended each line with a commor, instead try and continue it to the next line? Just a suggestion. Great poem! xx

Amazing =) i loved it.. very short but it has strong words anyways good work keep it up! 5/5

Wow.
Just, wow.... lol!
I love it... especially

"In to the deepest of shadows,
Slowly smothering me"

I love that line.
Keep it up!
5/5
~Stevie

This one was good.......I loved the feeling that it gave off. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Very good work! I gave it a 5(and, yes, I voted!)
Beautiful descriptions and so abstractly surreal that it makes perfect sense to me!

Haha... I loved this one, though. My favorite, I think. Nicely done!

Ohhh this is beautiful!
The imagery used created very vivid pictures, the word choice was a joy to read, as was the whole poem, my favourite part is the ending, it's so intense and hardhitting.

DONT CHANGE A THING! This is perfect just the way it is. I love the messaage, the word choice was amazingly brillant, and the flow was great, The emtion was strong, I really effin loved this one 5/5 for sure you deserve it.