by Truest Lies
The ending was strange because it used the repetition of petal-less Rose a little too much, but there were a few lines that I really liked. I think that in time you could build yourself a nice selection of poetry :-D |
by *Charisma*
Unusual ending, wish it rhymed like the rest, but it was def. well-written. Nice job! |
Wow beautiful poem. i liked the message it sent or at least i thought it sent. it seemed like the rose was really a depressed person. |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. Easy to understand. And has great word choice. Keep up the good work:) |
by Darien
I liked the rhymes, the flow was good too. Really neat ideas, with the rose without petals. Hmm, not more much I can say about this poem. |
by Tammy
Beautifully written poem. I truly enjoyed it. |
by Jenni Marie
The ending confused me a little, but apart from that, I enjoyed this muchly. |
by TeAr dROp
Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!! |