Comments : Petal less Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    The ending was strange because it used the repetition of petal-less Rose a little too much, but there were a few lines that I really liked. I think that in time you could build yourself a nice selection of poetry :-D

    //T.L.//

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Unusual ending, wish it rhymed like the rest, but it was def. well-written. Nice job!
    Charisma*

  • Wow beautiful poem. i liked the message it sent or at least i thought it sent. it seemed like the rose was really a depressed person.
    very good flow too.
    5/5
    βlαξκ ♥ hεαrτ

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. Easy to understand. And has great word choice. Keep up the good work:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I liked the rhymes, the flow was good too. Really neat ideas, with the rose without petals. Hmm, not more much I can say about this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    Beautifully written poem. I truly enjoyed it.
    Welcome to the site :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    The ending confused me a little, but apart from that, I enjoyed this muchly.
    I found it very sad butalso sweet, and I loved the imagery, as always.

  • 17 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!!