Hmm, just a thought to ponder
"can not" [cannot] it can be written that way.

"Hell dose not punish just the guilty for it punishes the "
[I think you meant 'does']

Very well written, created an ideal 'hell' with your words. A good poem, a few minor changes, that's all that's needed.

I think your others are better than this one, but it is still pretty good.
I really liked the last line, that was powerful.