Love Is Only!
by alisha mae Nov 24, 2006
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Love Is Only Wat You Make It And i Have Tried to Make It Everything..And Everything Worked! |
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17 years ago
Though I appreciate your breif style, it needs a little more-images, metaphors, etc. ans also to be broken up into poetic lines rather than prose style would make it much stronger.Just some advice.The emotion and meaning are already there.Expand on that.
Peace, Poetry, & Power,
Gary Jurechka
