by Chelsey Nov 24, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She always showed up to school dances |
by Eibutsina
Human nature can be so fickle can't it Chelly? I mean I couldn't really relate to this much, I was always in that popular group at school but being popular wasn't all it was made out to be. Looking back my highschool life probably would have been alot easier should I have been mroe selective about the people I associated with and made my own decisions about what mattered to be rather by being swayed by the popular influence...thats in retrospect of course, i didnt know then what I know now :o) |
by dora
Aw man that was really sad.. i think some people can relate to that one.. anyway u wrote it really good very touching.. will capture alot of peoples hearts i reckn. anyway keep it up. xx |
This strikes a little close to all of us at some point in our lives. You truly made me feel like I was a gawky teenager again going through the world and trying to find my niche. Kudos to you for a very emotion rendering piece. 5/5 |
Oh wow...this is so well written...i loved it |
by Daniel
Great piece and every thing but did u get her permission to write about her like tht she might feel a bit imbaressed tht people around the word can read about her problems,but well good piece |