A loved one :(

by Melissa   Nov 24, 2006


With no warning
with no consideration
taken from this world were they were needed

a loss so great
a hole so deep
causing a depression
causing defeat
surrendering your heart your soul
to this unkind fate.

the loss
the emptiness within
the hole in a soul
all because that loved ones gone

with now warning it came upon
and with now warning it changed life's

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  • 17 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Short sweet n too the point wish my poetry was like that at times nice use of word n constructive word play deserves a 4 1/2 but i'll give u 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I think that you used just the right words. you are a great poet. keep up the good work.5/5

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