I think this would make a good song :) good work

This is a really deep and beautiful poem! i agree with victoria- it hink would make an awesome song. xXx

Wow! awesome poem, i like the flow in the middle part and my favorite stanza was:

I hold onto what we had,
And it only makes me sad.
And I just want to be with you,
That's all I wanna do.

AWESOME! keep up the good, work, u truly have a talent. i;d love it if you;d check out my poems and comment/rate them thanks alot!! :D
Rachel<3