It said a lot, but the flowing wasn't the best.. it wasn't bad, but yeah.. it just didn't roll off the tongue like some of your other poems, but it has emotion. good job with that! thanx for commenting on my poem

It said a lot, but the flowing wasn't the best.. it wasn't bad, but yeah.. it just didn't roll off the tongue like some of your other poems, but it has emotion. good job with that! thanx for commenting on my poem