Life Isn't Always Bad

by kaybabEE   Nov 24, 2006


I wrote this poem for one of my best friends

I know it would be the hardest being in your shoes.
Things happen and you can't go back to the past.
Your choices aren't always easy..sometimes you lose.
At this point in your life its only your roughcast.

Your life will get better, it will soon be at ease.
Everyone has it tough at some point in their growth.
Just hold in there,keep your head high for me, please.
Tell me you will, lets make this a promising oath.

I know I'm not the best, but I'm here to listen
If you need a crying shoulder, I wont hesitate.
It'll give you comfort and your smile will glisten.
If you need to talk I'm here, its never too late.

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's always nice to have a friend who cares this much. Nice job showing that! My only suggestions are that your 3rd line doesn't quite match the depth of your poem. I would try making that line a little deeper. And you poem doesn't quite sound like it has an ending. It's a great poem, but it sounds like you could add more. But overall, very nice job! Nice write!
    Charisma*