by kaybabEE Nov 24, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
I wrote this poem for one of my best friends |
by *Charisma*
It's always nice to have a friend who cares this much. Nice job showing that! My only suggestions are that your 3rd line doesn't quite match the depth of your poem. I would try making that line a little deeper. And you poem doesn't quite sound like it has an ending. It's a great poem, but it sounds like you could add more. But overall, very nice job! Nice write! |