Comments : Sleeping With The Light On

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hhmmm...now this is a dark side of yours.. :o)
    well this thing is with many of my friends & even they sleep with lights on...but i guess this fear vanishes once u r married coz then u get used of ghost sleeping with u every night...:o)
    nicely written...infact very honestly written

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Argh, im speechless lol. Its fantastic Gem.. another lovely write 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a very nice poem!
    loved it loads...
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Nah, I think you could fit it in here. I really like this poem. Since we were little we have always been scared of some dark figure in the night to come and get us. And it seems as we get older the monster goes away, but the our tendencies always stay. We've all done it before: running up a dark staircase, rushing to get the lights on, all these things are natural. It's nice to see something like this and laugh at reflect ourselves, and our silly fears. It's funny, and I think thats why it belongs here.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Cos in the dark you can never be sure
    If your alone or something's there
    Like that shadow in the corner
    Is it a person or just the chair?
    ^^^
    I love this stanza Gemma !
    No matter how old we get, I think darkness will always make our eyes play tricks on us.....lol
    I myself have to sleep with the T.V on, Not because I'm afraid of the dark though but because I've done it since I was little and can't seem to sleep unless it's on.....Funny huh...
    I very much enjoyed reading this gem of a poem.
    Well done Gemma

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Cos in the dark you can never be sure
    If your alone or something's there
    Like that shadow in the corner
    Is it a person or just the chair?

    THANKS GEMMA! I WONT BE ABLE TO SLEEP TONIGHT! lol...GAWD one of my biggest fears is the dark and I am a fifteen year old girl...it really makes me nervous and like this stanza described I always have to know where every object is in my room so I know if its that objects shadow or someone in my room....creepy!!! Guhhh Bed in like 2 hours for me..I'm scared now lol! Thanks.....good write though!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlyn

    I spelt with the lights on a couple time because of my fear of stuff... lol... I thinks its funny and it portrays how some people are when it comes to fear 5/5

    sincerely,
    Katlyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, i enjoyed this, it was very good. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    Yeah but the dark can't hurt you honey cos when you fall asleep, i turn off the light :P
    Love you x

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "Cos in the dark you can never be sure
    If your alone or something's there
    Like that shadow in the corner
    Is it a person or just the chair?"

    Okk, this part officially got me afraid of the dark! lol, This is a great stanza...I really liked it!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Haha cute excellent lol