by BlueDreams Nov 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
My sweetheart... Dear, do you remember? |
by Melpomene
The flow throughout this piece was smooth and your word choice great. Very descriptive, I found it to hold vivd emotions which were absolutely stunning. All I can say to this piece is beautiful. Truely heartfelt. Well done keep up the good work~mel |
by KemistryKia
Great as usual |
by Cindy
Beautiful! |
by x.Athame.x
Beautiful, I hope that the footnote is not what I percieve it to be. I hope that you continue writing, for if you were to not it would be an unimaginable waste of talent. Best wishes. 5/5 |
Very touching and well-done..... |