Very sad, but I loved this.

Oh wow...this was so sad...I wasn't expecting that ending, that surprised me.
I loved the imagery in this, and the wording.

Trhis was so good poet, i like the way u write it is too long but its not boring it is really interesting to read. i love the emoiton and i can feel the sadness very nice. keep it up.. the line and flow was good.