Wagwan laura... wow that was deep, i like it... good job...

Really sad/dark poem. Very emotianal again, and i loved your vocabulary again! I self harm and ive been suicidal before, so i could relate to this poem. It was really deep, and meaningful. An excellent read! Again i thought you should of used punctuation but other then that it was an amzaing read! Keep them up, i llok forward to reading more! Take care xx

Another great deep poem by you, i like your style