by Lil_Lost_Cause Nov 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
More And More I Start To See, HOw Your Love Affected Me. |
by Carrotgirl
You have great rhyme in you poems, try doing some shorter verse's its harder but adds to the flow, another 5 |
Awe, that was so sad and very short, but I loved it. Great job! |