That's so awesome!!! I loved that. The flow was great for a song! Keep up the great work! 5/5! Check out my newest poem. God Bless

~*Tay*~

Hey my little puppy i wonder who this is for lol its wondefull cant wait to see u monday *muah*

I like lyrics, and these are very good, great flow and stucture, 5/5!!!! great job ciao, keep it up!!!

Bryan,

Great lyrics Hun.. I really liked this.. as usual the rhythmn and flow was excellent.. well done 5/5 xx

Ooh i liked the song. i could relate..it was very sweet:) i wish that i could relate to this..someday...:) 5/5 keep up the gr8 work