by BeautifulxMess Nov 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
She's going to hold you close, |
by Brittany C
Very good poem.5/5 |
by Jessica
Ooh, another great poem hun. You were made for writing love poems, they are your best. The flow was good and the storyline added interest. The descriptions and rhymes worked well too. Nciely done 5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
Another great poem by you. 5/5 |
by Stephanie
Sad poem about love to read. And the thing that is worse that this does happen to a lot of girls in life and I know for a fact that it has indeed happened to me. Painful emotions cheating makes you deal with but in the end you have to move on and for me that was the hardest thing to do. Great flow and choice of wording. 5/5 Keep it up! |