Sad poem about love to read. And the thing that is worse that this does happen to a lot of girls in life and I know for a fact that it has indeed happened to me. Painful emotions cheating makes you deal with but in the end you have to move on and for me that was the hardest thing to do. Great flow and choice of wording. 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Another great poem by you. 5/5

Ooh, another great poem hun. You were made for writing love poems, they are your best. The flow was good and the storyline added interest. The descriptions and rhymes worked well too. Nciely done 5/5

Very good poem.5/5