Wow.. That is VERY powerful.. I could almost feel the energy pulsing through me.. negative energy makes my insides tingle.. Teehee..
Very awesome..
Good luck.

This was another great poem...but i must say that the end line through off the rhythm some...other than that though it was excellent and still deserves a 5.

This is a wonderful poem i love it ur an awesome poet!

Aww. It's sort of sad. But happy? At the same time? Lol. I thought some of it seemed cute, the descriptions and everything. The flow was fantastic. I liked it a lot. It just rolled off the tip of my tounge, since I read poems out loud to fully understand the meanigns. =P

The descriptions were wonderful, yet again. They really gave me a great image in my mind. The 'story' itself was quite depressing, and mind-boggling (to me anyways =P ). Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha