This is a great poem steph, but i think you should make the 6th line a little bit longer, other than that this is very good.

This was good. I do feel you could've done a little better. i don't know the situation you're in or anything. but yeah...that's just my opinion..=/
it was a good read though, dont get me wrong...but i'm sure it wasn't your best... dont let that stop you from writing!!! =]

-Liz

Good flow. I like it cuz me can relate

Good, there is something missing though? i really liked it..

Well done, as all poems, you could always do better. but i dont think it was that bad, actually i thought apart form the flow at the end, it was a very good read
well done
xxxxxx

You have a talent ... sure maybe your poems don't always flow nicely or are alittle choppy but I like your stuff anyways because you write about stuff that lots of people can relate to ...... plus, the only thing that really matters is that you like your stuff and that it makes sense for you because in the end thats who ur writing for ..... anyways I really enjoy your stuff ... and just remember there is always room for improvement in everything you do(and i don't just mean you personally)! Good job, keep it up.5/5