Awww....that was a very sad poem to read, especially at the end. I can tell that you put a lot of emotion into this one. Um, the flow was little off in some parts but overall you did a very good job writing this poem. :) Sure a lot of girls can relate. 5/5

Stephanie

I really like this poem, it's writen really well.

thank you so much for the comment on my poem by the way, it meant a lot.