Gone

by Miakoda   Nov 25, 2006


So tender the lips of his kiss
So soft the touch of his hands
So sweet the tears that he had missed
While away with other plans
So she sits
alone in the abyss
Tears running down her cheeks
As she stares out to the rain
Not seeing the one who she seeks
Lost in forgotten in the fog alone wishing he was still home

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    I think u have real talent with all this, that is something ive yet to see

  • 17 years ago

    by who_are_you?

    That was really good!! Would you mind reading some of mine???? If you want?

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    This was different...kinda. =P Loved how you opened up with the first two lines. Nice write. Keep it up.

    -Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a very good poem, great flow and structure, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

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