Comments : Fault

  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    Make this a quote:

    "A contented heart,
    I continue to mislay,
    It's in your grasp,
    But you're running away."

    thats quote material. but put 'she' instead of 'u' or whateva so people know what ur talking about.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stacey

    I know it wasn't the point of your (well-written) poem, but yes, "The fault is [yours] clearly". :|

    Write a sorry poem. Sometimes your best works come out of the worst situations.