This is an outstanding poem in all aspects

Owch...Downvoted, I take it? Sad...this is a very good poem.

I love the hidden meaning behind this...It really speaks throughout the poem. Every line was perfect and strong save for my least favorite line "and a jar full of tears.". It seemed weak and I felt you could have found a stronger sentence...But, mine is only an opinion.
Nicely done. Sorry that you were downrated.
Take Care.

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